Thursday 22 February 2018

Friday Redubbed Script & Proposal

Deebo owes some money 
Smokey (To Craig): Aye bro, you need to know what happened to Red 
Craig (interested): What happened?
Smokey (starting to tell the story): You know how Deebo owed Red weed, right?
Craig (still interested): Right
Smokey (still in the story): So it was me, Deebo (fading into the story)
(In the story)
Smokey: You niggas broke(!), gimme my money
Deebo: What money?
Smokey: What money...
(Red arriving on the scene)
Red (shouting): Aye Deebo!
Deebo (to his friend): Hold this
(Passing his money to his friend)
Red: Come here
(Deebo walked up slowly to Red)
Red: Where's my money? I've been waiting for weeks, you're taking too long man
Deebo: What money?
Red: Don't act dumb, the money you owe me
Deebo: Oh you're money, sorry for the wait
Red: Good that you have the money, cause I was starting to get impatient
(Deebo uppercuts him)
Deebo: That's my money, prick!
(Smokey getting up)
Smokey: Oh shit!
(Running up to Red)
Smokey: You got knocked the fuck out!
(Red's bro getting out the car)
Red's bro (under his breath): Fucking, prick, I'll handle him
Deebo (angered): What you want some too?
Red's bro: Fuck no...
(Tapping Red)
Red's bro: Get up bro, come we cut
(Back to Smokey and Craig)
(They were laughing)
Smokey: After that they cut fam

Proposal
It took me about 3 takes to do the voices of the scenes. The audio came out just fine, however, we had to do retakes because of us either messing up the lines or just laughing; we was laughing at either us making jokes or laughing at each other messing up. The main purpose of this coursework was to use the exact same lines but dubbed with our audio; however, I chose to change it up, I made the script very similar, but I changed it to make it have a more 'British' theme. I personally like the changes that I had made for this scene, because it made more funny and I personally think this made it better for me to use.

The scene was just under two minutes long, this made it good for the dubbing. When coming across this scene, there was a lot of pauses within the dialogue; there was a lot of background sound within the scene, so when editing it, I had to put ambience sound within it, the ambience sound contained street sounds and people talking in the background. Also when Red gets uppercut by Deebo, I added a punching sound effect and it made it have a more comedic sound effect.

However, in some parts of the scene, there were the characters talking, however, there were parts of the scene where the characters were talking but there wasn't that much dialogue. This is because the audio was a bit too fast for the scene.  


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